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Watching the intro through again reminded me of two small errors that I noticed first time around.
5th line: When racing was in its GOLD years.
I feel it should read GOLDEN years. (But not critical)
6th line: Driving was a way of LIVE
Should be LIFE
This now is just my personal taste, but I feel the intro music comes in with too much of a BANG.
I find this a little off putting. This is why I instantly skip the intro.
If the volume came up gradually or there was a short instrumental interlude before the Choral I think it would be more pleasing on the ear.
Once again, just my personal opinion.
I would like to qualify my criticism by the fact that I am a musician of over 40years, albeit a drummer. But that does give me the luxury to sit back and watch peoples reactions to music.
When you play in bands, it is critical in a quiet situation not to start off too loud. I'm not talking Rock Concerts here, I'm talking about easy listening music, where you don't need to make a big statement from the outset, but slowly move your audience to the required level.